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  • Hello everybody, please can you tell me if it's correct ?

  • The main idea of the text is about the gun control in Colorado and the tragedies happened in this state .
  • President Obama is trying to control the use of guns in Colorado to avoid tragedies , such as those that happened in Denver and Columbine .

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