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Hello everybody, please can you tell me if it's correct ?
The main idea of the text is about the gun control in Colorado and the tragedies happened in this state .
President Obama is trying to control the use of guns in Colorado to avoid tragedies , such as those that happened in Denver and Columbine .

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- Hello everybody, please can you tell me if it's correct ?
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Πρόταση 1
- The main idea of the text is about the gun control in Colorado and the tragedies happened in this state .
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- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 1
Πρόταση 2
- President Obama is trying to control the use of guns in Colorado to avoid tragedies , such as those that happened in Denver and Columbine .
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- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 2