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Do you enjoy shopping?
Hi Peter, It was so nice to hear from you.
Firstly, I love go shopping because I like to look cool always.
My favorite shops are Decimas and Zara.
On the one hand, Decimas is a sport shop.
I love this clothing store because I mad for the sports and its clothes is beautiful.
Moreover, it's very cheap.
On the other hand, when you come into this places, you're going to find a modern clothes store for young people.
Its clothes isn't too expensive and is very good.
If you had my same tastes, you would visit this shops.
I hope you all have a great weekend,

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- Hi Peter, It was so nice to hear from you.
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- Firstly, I love go shopping because I like to look cool always.
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- My favorite shops are Decimas and Zara.
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- On the one hand, Decimas is a sport shop.
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- I love this clothing store because I mad for the sports and its clothes is beautiful.
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- Moreover, it's very cheap.
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- On the other hand, when you come into this places, you're going to find a modern clothes store for young people.
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- Its clothes isn't too expensive and is very good.
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- If you had my same tastes, you would visit this shops.
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- I hope you all have a great weekend,
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