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Do you enjoy shopping?
Hi Peter, It was so nice to hear from you.
Firstly, I love go shopping because I like to look cool always.
My favorite shops are Decimas and Zara.
On the one hand, Decimas is a sport shop.
I love this clothing store because I mad for the sports and its clothes is beautiful.
Moreover, it's very cheap.
On the other hand, when you come into this places, you're going to find a modern clothes store for young people.
Its clothes isn't too expensive and is very good.
If you had my same tastes, you would visit this shops.
I hope you all have a great weekend,

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- Do you enjoy shopping?
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句子 1
- Hi Peter, It was so nice to hear from you.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- Firstly, I love go shopping because I like to look cool always.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- My favorite shops are Decimas and Zara.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- On the one hand, Decimas is a sport shop.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- I love this clothing store because I mad for the sports and its clothes is beautiful.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- Moreover, it's very cheap.
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句子 7
- On the other hand, when you come into this places, you're going to find a modern clothes store for young people.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- Its clothes isn't too expensive and is very good.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8
句子 9
- If you had my same tastes, you would visit this shops.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9
句子 10
- I hope you all have a great weekend,
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 10