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  • 1.My English granny was ten when she and all her family managed to get into Westminster Abbey and watch a new queen crowning.
  • That's what she says: “On the second of June 1953 all London streets were so crowded.
  • Besides,there were people from other English cities and towns.
  • Sometimes it seemed that all the English gathered to see the ceremony with their own eyes.
  • But fortunately it was broadcast over TV.
  • There were many people in the Abbey and among them there were Duke of Norfolk,Prince Charles It was hard to see a new queen.
  • But when I found her with my eyes I was fascinated by her clothes!
  • I have never seen seen such expensive and beautiful dress before !
  • The ceremony itself was so solemn that I scared to breathe...It was unforgettable ceremony.....
  • 2.I work as a journalist.
  • _Till now my relatives and acquaintances _ask me to tell them about that wedding.
  • First I must say that this ceremonial wedding took place in Westminster Abbey on the 29th April,2011.
  • Almost all the relatives of both were present.
  • On that day I saw many other journalists,photographers and reporters._Of course, it took much money to hold this event,but it was worthy of it.
  • I emphasize _that Catherine does not come from very wealthy and influential family._So do my_colleagues.

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