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  • Please correct the story for me. Thank you very much.

  • Julia wanted to go to Jillian's house to play because Jullian had the best dress-up clothes.
  • Momma made a quick phone call to get permission from Jillian's mom, then walked Julia over to her house.
  • Before long Jillian and Julia were pulling dress-up clothes from a big trunk.
  • They played all afternoon.
  • They changed dresses, and wore different hats.
  • But no matter what clothes Julia had on, she always wore the pretty blue and white sparkly necklace.When Julia came home, she bring the necklace too.
  • She didn't mean to steal the necklace from her friend.
  • That night, she couldn't sleep.
  • "Jillian probably won't want to be my friend anymore", she thought.
  • Early next morning Julia went to her mom and told her the whole story.
  • "Thank you for telling me.
  • Now, let's go talk to Jillian together," Mom said.

TOLONG, BANTUANNYA UNTUK MEMBENARKAN SETIAP KALIMAT! - English