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misangocle08022004'den mesaj - English

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  • There was a major earthquake.
  • It buried a school.
  • Children were studying in that time.
  • That was a bad day of people around here.
  • There was a young man.
  • He was a father.
  • He rode his motorbike very fast.
  • He thought about his little daughter and felt very worry.
  • He found his daughter’s class and started to dig.
  • Everyone were sad but no one supported him because they didn’t trust to miracle.
  • But the man trusted the miracle.
  • He dug and beseeched : “Please help me.” Long time passed, many people said him that he must to go home.
  • Even the rescue teams shook their head and went away too.
  • The man kept dig although sky was dark.
  • All night, he didn’t rested.
  • He drank his sweat.
  • Next day, when the sun was very high, he saw notice board of his daughter’s class.
  • He was very happy.
  • He yelled: “ Where are you, Laura?” Suddenly, there was a small answer sound: “I’m here, dad.” Wall made a big space.
  • I was same as a cave.
  • All children were alive.
  • With ten blood fingers, he hugged his daughter.
  • Laura said with him: “I said to all my friends that we will rescue by my dad.
  • Because he promised that he will protect for me in all my life.”

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