Văn bản từ misangocle08022004 -
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- There was a major earthquake.
- It buried a school.
- Children were studying in that time.
- That was a bad day of people around here.
- There was a young man.
- He was a father.
- He rode his motorbike very fast.
- He thought about his little daughter and felt very worry.
- He found his daughter’s class and started to dig.
- Everyone were sad but no one supported him because they didn’t trust to miracle.
- But the man trusted the miracle.
- He dug and beseeched : “Please help me.” Long time passed, many people said him that he must to go home.
- Even the rescue teams shook their head and went away too.
- The man kept dig although sky was dark.
- All night, he didn’t rested.
- He drank his sweat.
- Next day, when the sun was very high, he saw notice board of his daughter’s class.
- He was very happy.
- He yelled: “ Where are you, Laura?” Suddenly, there was a small answer sound: “I’m here, dad.” Wall made a big space.
- I was same as a cave.
- All children were alive.
- With ten blood fingers, he hugged his daughter.
- Laura said with him: “I said to all my friends that we will rescue by my dad.
- Because he promised that he will protect for me in all my life.”
- misangocle08022004
December 2016
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