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Please help me to correct this story. Thank you so much.
In the second world war, there was one Jew family was persecution, the first son and the last son went to found someone help them.
The first son found some people, who were helping him before.
The last son found some people, who he helped before.
And finally, the first son was alive and the last son dead.
Who loves you will help you more and more.
Who do you love won’t help you when you need some help.
In life, who was really loyal with you, they love you and help you when you need some help.

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- Please help me to correct this story. Thank you so much.
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문장 1
- In the second world war, there was one Jew family was persecution, the first son and the last son went to found someone help them.
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문장 2
- The first son found some people, who were helping him before.
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문장 3
- The last son found some people, who he helped before.
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문장 4
- And finally, the first son was alive and the last son dead.
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문장 5
- Who loves you will help you more and more.
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문장 6
- Who do you love won’t help you when you need some help.
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문장 7
- In life, who was really loyal with you, they love you and help you when you need some help.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7