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ADJUVA AD EMEDANDUM NUNC!uncorrected

Scriptum ab misangocle08022004 - English

Please help me to correct this story. Thank you so much.
In the second world war, there was one Jew family was persecution, the first son and the last son went to found someone help them.
The first son found some people, who were helping him before.
The last son found some people, who he helped before.
And finally, the first son was alive and the last son dead.
Who loves you will help you more and more.
Who do you love won’t help you when you need some help.
In life, who was really loyal with you, they love you and help you when you need some help.

titulus
- Please help me to correct this story. Thank you so much.
  Elige nunc !
- ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - titulus
Sententia 1
- In the second world war, there was one Jew family was persecution, the first son and the last son went to found someone help them.
  Elige nunc !
- ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 1
Sententia 2
- The first son found some people, who were helping him before.
  Elige nunc !
- ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 2
Sententia 3
- The last son found some people, who he helped before.
  Elige nunc !
- ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 3
Sententia 4
- And finally, the first son was alive and the last son dead.
  Elige nunc !
- ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 4
Sententia 5
- Who loves you will help you more and more.
  Elige nunc !
- ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 5
Sententia 6
- Who do you love won’t help you when you need some help.
  Elige nunc !
- ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 6
Sententia 7
- In life, who was really loyal with you, they love you and help you when you need some help.
  Elige nunc !
- ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 7