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  • Check my opinion essay

  • Theme: Some people think that young people should follow in their parents' footsteps when choosing a profession Choosing a profession can be sometimes a real hardship.
  • There are people who think that young people should be engaged in one and the same profession their parents are.
  • However, some people state that the younger generation ought to choose a profession without following parents' footsteps.
  • So,who is right?
  • In my view, we should choose a profession ourselves.
  • Firstly, making such tough decisions makes us more mature,independent and responsible for our future.
  • Secondly, our parents will not be to blame if it turns out that profession does not make us happy and brings us satisfaction.
  • But there are people who advise young people to follow their parents' footsteps.
  • They think that we will know much more about profession and parents will always be ready to help us if something goes wrong.
  • I cannot disagree with this statement but I strongly believe that we must be independent and choose a profession which we really like.
  • In conclusion I would like to say that we work almost half our lives so it is cruical to have a job that is really to your taste.
  • Young people should rely on themselves when choosing a profession because it will help us to make our own way.

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