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  • Married people at work

  • The bar chart provides a summary of the average hours married people spend daily in paid employment.
  • There two main age groups of husbands and wives (24-44 and 45-64 years old).
  • As seen in the legend, total number of hours includes paid work and unpaid work at home.
  • Men aged both 24-44 and 45-64 spend approximately seven hours per day at paid work and not more than two and a half hours daily on unpaid work at home (with men who are 24-44 spending slightly more time working at home then representatives from the older group).
  • As a result, younger men work about one hour more than husbands from another group do.
  • Conversely, women, in general, work less at paid work and more at home.
  • Interestingly, wives aged 24-44 work approximately the same number of hours at both places (five hours and five and a half hours at work and outside of it respectively) while the women aged 45-64 are at work almost as much time as the men of the same age.
  • But at unpaid work women are almost twice longer.
  • Overall, women from both groups on average spend the most hours in total working (11 hours).

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    • Men aged both 24-44 and 45-64 spend approximately seven hours per day at paid work and not more than two and a half hours daily on unpaid work at home (with men who are 24-44 spending slightly more time working at home then representatives from the older group).
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    • Interestingly, wives aged 24-44 work approximately the same number of hours at both places (five hours and five and a half hours at work and outside of it respectively) while the women aged 45-64 are at work almost as much time as the men of the same age.
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