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  • Check my opinion essay

  • THEME: The Internet is the greatest time-waster.
  • It cannot be denied that the Internet plays a great role in our life.
  • Some people think we waste our time because of it.
  • However,others claim that it is the most useful tool mankind ever created and we just need to learn how to use it properly.
  • So,who is right?
  • In my judgment the world wide web is not a time-waster if people are taught time management.
  • The Internet is so important in our daily life that we cannot imagine ourselves without it.
  • Firstly,thanks to it,we get quick acess to necessary information wherever and whenever.
  • Secondly, the Internet helps us improve our English because we can practise it with any foreigner.
  • People can become fluent English speakers thanks to this opportunity.
  • But there are people who think that we just spend precious time on computer games and social networking sites using the Internet.
  • There is lot of truth in what they say but I believe that such people do not understand that the Internet does us the good if we know how to budget our time the right way and avoid such entertainments.
  • In conclusion,I would like to say that we cannot exist without the Internet.
  • If we use time management, it can easily become our friend

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