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  • An email in English

  • Hello, I have to send an email to a school for information.
  • I wonder if I'm right.
  • can you correct me please ?
  • " Dear Madam / Sir, I would like some information.
  • I'm a french student and I'm currently in first year of business school specializing in the sector of fashion, luxury and design ( bachelor) .
  • I am looking for what I might do next.
  • I am currently working on a lookbook and I am helped by a teacher introductory fashion.
  • And I master all forms of drawings (I did a year in the workshops of the Louvre).
  • I wonder if I can introduce myself to the "master in fashion" of your institute?
  • Yours faithfully, " Thanks

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