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An email in English
Hello, I have to send an email to a school for information.
I wonder if I'm right.
can you correct me please ?
" Dear Madam / Sir, I would like some information.
I'm a french student and I'm currently in first year of business school specializing in the sector of fashion, luxury and design ( bachelor) .
I am looking for what I might do next.
I am currently working on a lookbook and I am helped by a teacher introductory fashion.
And I master all forms of drawings (I did a year in the workshops of the Louvre).
I wonder if I can introduce myself to the "master in fashion" of your institute?
Yours faithfully, " Thanks

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- An email in English
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câu 1
- Hello, I have to send an email to a school for information.
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câu 2
- I wonder if I'm right.
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câu 3
- can you correct me please ?
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câu 4
- " Dear Madam / Sir, I would like some information.
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câu 5
- I'm a french student and I'm currently in first year of business school specializing in the sector of fashion, luxury and design ( bachelor) .
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câu 6
- I am looking for what I might do next.
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câu 7
- I am currently working on a lookbook and I am helped by a teacher introductory fashion.
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câu 8
- And I master all forms of drawings (I did a year in the workshops of the Louvre).
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câu 9
- I wonder if I can introduce myself to the "master in fashion" of your institute?
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câu 10
- Yours faithfully, " Thanks
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10