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Teks daripada Wejo - English

  • Just read my essay

  • Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because meat can cause serious health problems.
  • Vegetarianism is widely discussed theme in the modern world.
  • Some people think that we need to stop being meat eaters as meat destroys our health.
  • However, others suppose that meat is an extremely important product for us So,who is right?
  • Personally, I think that we should become vegetarians.
  • Firstly,as scientists discovered, fruits and vegetables make us slim and healthier because they contain vitamins that are vitally necessary for our good physical health.
  • Secondly,as we all know,meat is rather expensive product.
  • Not only it has a high price, but also it takes us too much time to cook it.
  • But there are some people who believe that we should eat meat.
  • They say it contains proteins we cannnot live without but I must say that there are such proteins in eggs and milk.
  • Moreover, eggs and milk are much cheaper than meat.
  • It helps us to save money.
  • In conclusion,I would like to say that vegetarianism has much more advantages than disadvantages.
  • It is the best way to keep fit and not to spend much money.
  • I think more and more people will start avoiding meat in the future wen they realize how good vegetarianism is.

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