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  • About Manchester

  • I know something about Manchester.
  • It history is very related with industrial revolution, because this city was the first industrial place of Europe's city.
  • Firstly, I'd like talk also about cottoms companys because it was really important for to endure low degrees.
  • Football and music are other features from this city.

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