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About Manchester
I know something about Manchester.
It history is very related with industrial revolution, because this city was the first industrial place of Europe's city.
Firstly, I'd like talk also about cottoms companys because it was really important for to endure low degrees.
Football and music are other features from this city.

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- About Manchester
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Sentence 1
- I know something about Manchester.
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Sentence 2
- It history is very related with industrial revolution, because this city was the first industrial place of Europe's city.
  Vote now!
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Sentence 3
- Firstly, I'd like talk also about cottoms companys because it was really important for to endure low degrees.
  Vote now!
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Sentence 4
- Football and music are other features from this city.
  Vote now!
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