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Texto de juanfmusik - English

  • hello :D

  • hi im juan from colombia :D today i have had a good day ,my day started at 11:20 am late cause the last night i watched hostel part 2 a movie :D but that is another story, i got up and my breakfast was cereal with apple.
  • after i went to my grandparents house and i say god bye couse they gonna go to great grandfathers farm , they told me hey juan please turn on the christmas lights when the night come -ok that is done.
  • so i go to my house and i called my cousins and one of my friends and we played the guitar, played with the xbox and we did exercices :D ..........................thanks..................

POR FAVOR, ¡AYUDA A CORREGIR CADA ORACIÓN! - English

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  • Oración 1
    • hi im juan from colombia :D today i have had a good day ,my day started at 11:20 am late cause the last night i watched hostel part 2 a movie :D but that is another story, i got up and my breakfast was cereal with apple.
      ¡Vota ahora!
    • ¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 1¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 1
  • Oración 2
    • after i went to my grandparents house and i say god bye couse they gonna go to great grandfathers farm , they told me hey juan please turn on the christmas lights when the night come -ok that is done.
      ¡Vota ahora!
    • ¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 2¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 2
  • Oración 3
    • so i go to my house and i called my cousins and one of my friends and we played the guitar, played with the xbox and we did exercices :D ..........................thanks..................
      ¡Vota ahora!
    • ¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 3¡AGREGA una NUEVA CORRECCIÓN! - Oración 3