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  • hi im juan from colombia :D today i have had a good day ,my day started at 11:20 am late cause the last night i watched hostel part 2 a movie :D but that is another story, i got up and my breakfast was cereal with apple.
  • after i went to my grandparents house and i say god bye couse they gonna go to great grandfathers farm , they told me hey juan please turn on the christmas lights when the night come -ok that is done.
  • so i go to my house and i called my cousins and one of my friends and we played the guitar, played with the xbox and we did exercices :D ..........................thanks..................

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  • câu 1
    • hi im juan from colombia :D today i have had a good day ,my day started at 11:20 am late cause the last night i watched hostel part 2 a movie :D but that is another story, i got up and my breakfast was cereal with apple.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • after i went to my grandparents house and i say god bye couse they gonna go to great grandfathers farm , they told me hey juan please turn on the christmas lights when the night come -ok that is done.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • so i go to my house and i called my cousins and one of my friends and we played the guitar, played with the xbox and we did exercices :D ..........................thanks..................
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3