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  • The European Commissioner

  • The European Commissioner for Employment and Social Affairs, Marianne Thyssen, has promised to move up a gear: there is the necessity for a change and thanks to the European Pillar of Social Rights they will meet 4 demands: better life opportunities for young people, a good balance between life and work, employing everyone’s professional skills and not lagging anybody behind.
  • Thyssen has made it clear that the European Commission will play its part.
  • However, it will be up to the member states to promote the policies that are and will be necessary.
  • Economic policy means social policy and vice versa, therefore the two things cannot be considered as free-standing.
  • The call is for everybody to work on this matter.

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    • The European Commissioner for Employment and Social Affairs, Marianne Thyssen, has promised to move up a gear: there is the necessity for a change and thanks to the European Pillar of Social Rights they will meet 4 demands: better life opportunities for young people, a good balance between life and work, employing everyone’s professional skills and not lagging anybody behind.
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    • Economic policy means social policy and vice versa, therefore the two things cannot be considered as free-standing.
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