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  • THE THOUGH LIFE OF THE MAASAI

  • First of all, it must be said that the Maasai are the most popular and friendly African tribe.
  • Therefore, they become a tourist attraction unfortunately.
  • Nevertheless, nowadays their lives are truly hard.
  • They live in a kind of neighbourhood called kraal.
  • Because they are farmers mainly, their herd and livestock occupy a special situation in the centre of the kraal, in order to protect them.
  • Their farm animals such as cows, goat, sheep are protect by the fences, which are built by Maasai male.
  • Besides, Maasai male build the fences of kraal in order to protect Maasai people from wild animals.
  • On the other hand, the Maasai female are in charge of building and keeping the Maasai house…also they have other daily chores such as: to bring water, milking, to take care of children, etc. As you can see they live freely in the middle of nature, honestly in a beautiful environment.
  • But there are downsides too; they haven’t got childhood because of their obligations.
  • Maasai aged 6 have many duties, which grow like they.
  • At the age of 13 they are warriors, and they are elders when they are 30 years old.
  • Personally I believe that it is advisable to protect and respect them.

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