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POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ TERAZ!Niepoprawione

Text from Khaymon - English

  • An opinion essay

  • Nowadays more and more people become vegetarians.
  • But others say that they can't do without meat and fish.
  • Can vegetables bring us all nutrients?
  • Should we abandon from the meat and become vegetarians?
  • These questions bother many of people through the world.
  • Some people think that vegetable diet is useful not only for people suffering from obesity but also for healthy people.
  • Others prefer to get more pleasure from meat and fish not paying attention to any diets invented by scientists.
  • As for me, I think that taste is not main thing in food.
  • Food should be helpful because It is the important for our life.
  • Vegetables can bring us more of those vitamins which our body needs.
  • Moreover, the many of vegetables are very delicious.
  • For example, I very like tomatoes, cucumbers, radishes and many others.
  • But there are many of people thinking that firstly food must be taste and delicious.
  • It is not surprising that we can see them in fast-food cafes like McDonalds and KFC.
  • Often they facing with overweighting, diabetes or even cancer.
  • To sum it up, I think that we should care about our ration and choose only healthful products.
  • I ever try to select only best food in shops because our choice reflects on our mood and state of health.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English