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  • The importance of learning to play a sport

  • The society we live in is always discovering new ways of improving our life quality.
  • Thanks to recent scientific researches, people know all the elements that compose the food they eat and try to buy as much healthy food as possible.
  • Apart from eating good food, we should play sport during each stage of our life to make it better.
  • Clearly, it is important for our health, our humour and our relationships.
  • The first advantage of playing sports is on health.
  • Indeed, it is well kown that the more sports you practise the more you will get fit and reinforce your body system.
  • Furthermore, scientists state that sporting activities have positive consequences on cardio circular system and relieve our body pressure.
  • The second advantage of playing sports is the possibility to get better humour.
  • As a matter of fact, sport activities produce positive substances in our organism that make ourselves feel better and be happier.
  • Moreover, sport activities would certainly not let us feel depressed or bored.
  • For instance, it would be better to spend an afternoon riding a bycicle with your children instead of sitting in front of television to watch cartoons.
  • Another advantage of playing sports is the increase of social relationships.
  • It is likely that if we start attending a gym we will know new people and enlarge the number of our friends.
  • In addition to this, many kinds of sports need to be played in a group of people.
  • As a consequence, you will learn not only to play a new spor, but also to be part of a team.
  • Finally, it may be concluded taht sports are extremely important for our life because they reduce healthy problems and improve our mood, so we should practise them on a regular basis.

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    • Thanks to recent scientific researches, people know all the elements that compose the food they eat and try to buy as much healthy food as possible.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • Indeed, it is well kown that the more sports you practise the more you will get fit and reinforce your body system.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • Furthermore, scientists state that sporting activities have positive consequences on cardio circular system and relieve our body pressure.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • As a matter of fact, sport activities produce positive substances in our organism that make ourselves feel better and be happier.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • For instance, it would be better to spend an afternoon riding a bycicle with your children instead of sitting in front of television to watch cartoons.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • It is likely that if we start attending a gym we will know new people and enlarge the number of our friends.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • Finally, it may be concluded taht sports are extremely important for our life because they reduce healthy problems and improve our mood, so we should practise them on a regular basis.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 16