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Text from vaness182 - English

  • May 14th.

  • Today is Tuesday, May 14th.
  • Today the classes will start at 9.30 o'clock.
  • Since last weekend I started to watch a new serie by samurais, I like it, I really like it, for that, yesterday my girlfriend I gave me a samurai hat.
  • Now it is on the display, When Xiomy game me the hat, she said to me: "do you feel like throwing yourself to give me a hug", I ran to her and gave a kiss and I put on my head the hat, and I put my head held high, and I started to take a photos all day, When my mommy called us to have the lunch, my little brother said to me: "and the sword, where is?", and I said to Xiomy "it's true", but I love my hat, I love and I'm going to the school wearing it.
  • A day early, in Colombian It was the mother's day, and I did the presents for my mommy in the early morning, I did the breakfast to her, I bought the necklace, the necklace is made of silver, is very beautifull.
  • Now when I'm writting it, my mommy passed beside me and frown me, like to said to me: "take a shower and go to school", well I go to school now.
  • But I need to do a deal with my mommy for a permission, I shall to said to my mommy: "mommy, Might I go to pass the night with my girlfriend?" then, I go to said that to my mommy.

AUTA KORJAAMAAN JOKAINEN LAUSE! - English

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    • Since last weekend I started to watch a new serie by samurais, I like it, I really like it, for that, yesterday my girlfriend I gave me a samurai hat.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 3
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    • Now it is on the display, When Xiomy game me the hat, she said to me: "do you feel like throwing yourself to give me a hug", I ran to her and gave a kiss and I put on my head the hat, and I put my head held high, and I started to take a photos all day, When my mommy called us to have the lunch, my little brother said to me: "and the sword, where is?", and I said to Xiomy "it's true", but I love my hat, I love and I'm going to the school wearing it.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 4
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    • A day early, in Colombian It was the mother's day, and I did the presents for my mommy in the early morning, I did the breakfast to her, I bought the necklace, the necklace is made of silver, is very beautifull.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 5
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    • Now when I'm writting it, my mommy passed beside me and frown me, like to said to me: "take a shower and go to school", well I go to school now.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 6
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    • But I need to do a deal with my mommy for a permission, I shall to said to my mommy: "mommy, Might I go to pass the night with my girlfriend?" then, I go to said that to my mommy.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 7