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vaness182'den mesaj - English

  • May 14th.

  • Today is Tuesday, May 14th.
  • Today the classes will start at 9.30 o'clock.
  • Since last weekend I started to watch a new serie by samurais, I like it, I really like it, for that, yesterday my girlfriend I gave me a samurai hat.
  • Now it is on the display, When Xiomy game me the hat, she said to me: "do you feel like throwing yourself to give me a hug", I ran to her and gave a kiss and I put on my head the hat, and I put my head held high, and I started to take a photos all day, When my mommy called us to have the lunch, my little brother said to me: "and the sword, where is?", and I said to Xiomy "it's true", but I love my hat, I love and I'm going to the school wearing it.
  • A day early, in Colombian It was the mother's day, and I did the presents for my mommy in the early morning, I did the breakfast to her, I bought the necklace, the necklace is made of silver, is very beautifull.
  • Now when I'm writting it, my mommy passed beside me and frown me, like to said to me: "take a shower and go to school", well I go to school now.
  • But I need to do a deal with my mommy for a permission, I shall to said to my mommy: "mommy, Might I go to pass the night with my girlfriend?" then, I go to said that to my mommy.

Lütfen, Her cümleyi düzeltmek için yardım edin ! - English

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  • cümle 1
  • cümle 2
  • cümle 3
    • Since last weekend I started to watch a new serie by samurais, I like it, I really like it, for that, yesterday my girlfriend I gave me a samurai hat.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 3YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 3
  • cümle 4
    • Now it is on the display, When Xiomy game me the hat, she said to me: "do you feel like throwing yourself to give me a hug", I ran to her and gave a kiss and I put on my head the hat, and I put my head held high, and I started to take a photos all day, When my mommy called us to have the lunch, my little brother said to me: "and the sword, where is?", and I said to Xiomy "it's true", but I love my hat, I love and I'm going to the school wearing it.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 4YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 4
  • cümle 5
    • A day early, in Colombian It was the mother's day, and I did the presents for my mommy in the early morning, I did the breakfast to her, I bought the necklace, the necklace is made of silver, is very beautifull.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 5YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 5
  • cümle 6
    • Now when I'm writting it, my mommy passed beside me and frown me, like to said to me: "take a shower and go to school", well I go to school now.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 6YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 6
  • cümle 7
    • But I need to do a deal with my mommy for a permission, I shall to said to my mommy: "mommy, Might I go to pass the night with my girlfriend?" then, I go to said that to my mommy.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 7YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 7