添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

Vale12からのテキスト - English

  • Trekking

  • Hi everybody, I'm Valentina and I want to tell you about my second passion: trekking.
  • I love so much to walk into the nature.
  • I often watch films about nature: Into the wild, Wild, Tracks , Revenant, 127 hours...
  • I like to walk with the sounds of birds near the rever or waterfalls.
  • I love "silence" of the nature, because city life is very frenetic and noisy.
  • Recently, I came back home before starting trekking, because I had scare of wild boar :////// I saw a dead BIG wild boar!!!!
  • It was not very nice thing.
  • See you soon, bye community of polyglot club! Vale

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English