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Trekking
Hi everybody, I'm Valentina and I want to tell you about my second passion: trekking.
I love so much to walk into the nature.
I often watch films about nature: Into the wild, Wild, Tracks , Revenant, 127 hours...
I like to walk with the sounds of birds near the rever or waterfalls.
I love "silence" of the nature, because city life is very frenetic and noisy.
Recently, I came back home before starting trekking, because I had scare of wild boar :////// I saw a dead BIG wild boar!!!!
It was not very nice thing.
See you soon, bye community of polyglot club! Vale

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- Hi everybody, I'm Valentina and I want to tell you about my second passion: trekking.
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- I love so much to walk into the nature.
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- I often watch films about nature: Into the wild, Wild, Tracks , Revenant, 127 hours...
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- I like to walk with the sounds of birds near the rever or waterfalls.
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- I love "silence" of the nature, because city life is very frenetic and noisy.
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- Recently, I came back home before starting trekking, because I had scare of wild boar :////// I saw a dead BIG wild boar!!!!
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- It was not very nice thing.
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- See you soon, bye community of polyglot club! Vale
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