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Văn bản từ wahajo - English

  • Narrative Essay

  • Last Thursday I went abroad and met my Canadian cousin Jack.
  • We spent the whole day together.
  • When eating time was approaching, we decided to go to the woods to look for raspberries, since our grandma was willing to prepare a delicious cake if we went after the missing ingredients.
  • When we got there, something impressive happened.
  • We felt like eating our grandma’s cake, so we were trying to collect raspberries as quick as possible.
  • Suddenly, we heard a spooky noise.
  • Jacked got afraid because he thought that there was a wild animal inside the bushes, so he proposed to go our way back.
  • However, by the time we wanted to return, we realised that our footprints had disappeared.
  • We were lost in the forest, and Jack was about to burst into tears.
  • Luckily, we discovered that the noise was nothing but another man among the leaves who was also looking for wild nuts.
  • His truck was parked next to the trees, and it was full of raspberries!
  • After seeing Jack’s scared face, he felt so guilty that he decided to lift us home and give us the half of the load he had on his vehicle.
  • In the end, we all enjoyed eating the tasty pie.

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