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Texto de MarkShu - English

  • I'm Mark.

  • Hello! I'm Mark.
  • I'm 22 years old bachelor of philosophy.
  • I don't have a job.
  • Also, I have failed two attempts to admit in master degree.
  • I have prepared to admission olympiad from September.
  • But I took only 45/100.
  • What should I do now? I don't know.
  • I can't work, because of Russian laws, I must serve in the army at first.
  • No army, no work.
  • Also, you can wait and hide until you are 26.
  • There is another option.
  • Illegal option - you can pay right people for avoidance army.
  • But it's not cheap.
  • No one will give you a guarantee.
  • My mom offered me to pay for my education.
  • But it's also a huge amount of money.
  • And I always studied free.
  • I don't want problems for my family.
  • What should I do?
  • What do you think?

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