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the journey in japan
hey, i'm Rémi from France and i'm going to work in Japan in 3 weeks for 1 month.
My job is really interesting but i couldn't see my familly during this moment.
We haven't enough money to go there all together.
i have a 2 year old son, and i hope he won't grow up fastly in my absence.
i know it's only 1 month but it will be the first time i leave so long and so far.
of course every day i'll see him and my darling on internet, it's better than nothing.
thank you for you help to correct me.
have a good afternoon and a nice easter !

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- hey, i'm Rémi from France and i'm going to work in Japan in 3 weeks for 1 month.
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- My job is really interesting but i couldn't see my familly during this moment.
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- We haven't enough money to go there all together.
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- i have a 2 year old son, and i hope he won't grow up fastly in my absence.
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- i know it's only 1 month but it will be the first time i leave so long and so far.
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- of course every day i'll see him and my darling on internet, it's better than nothing.
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- thank you for you help to correct me.
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- have a good afternoon and a nice easter !
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8