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the journey in japan
hey, i'm Rémi from France and i'm going to work in Japan in 3 weeks for 1 month.
My job is really interesting but i couldn't see my familly during this moment.
We haven't enough money to go there all together.
i have a 2 year old son, and i hope he won't grow up fastly in my absence.
i know it's only 1 month but it will be the first time i leave so long and so far.
of course every day i'll see him and my darling on internet, it's better than nothing.
thank you for you help to correct me.
have a good afternoon and a nice easter !

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- the journey in japan
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句子 1
- hey, i'm Rémi from France and i'm going to work in Japan in 3 weeks for 1 month.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- My job is really interesting but i couldn't see my familly during this moment.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- We haven't enough money to go there all together.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- i have a 2 year old son, and i hope he won't grow up fastly in my absence.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- i know it's only 1 month but it will be the first time i leave so long and so far.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- of course every day i'll see him and my darling on internet, it's better than nothing.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- thank you for you help to correct me.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- have a good afternoon and a nice easter !
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8