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  • Ecology

  • Over the past few decades, the flora and fauna have decreased dramatically, that, unfortunately, could lead to a full devastating of the whole world, we know today.
  • There are a number of considerable dangers with regard to this phenomenon, and various measures can be taken both by the public sector and citizens to improve the situation.
  • This essay will review the negative aspects of wildlife decreasing and will propose some solutions to address the problem.
  • The most critical concern is that a growing society is increasingly demanding necessities such as clean water and nutritious food.
  • As a result, to provide a continuously growing population, mankind has to cultivate more and more lands, destroying forests, marshes and other natural habitats of animals.
  • Besides this, global warming, acid rains, ozone hole and many other artificial ecological issues, continue to cause damage, irreparable to the earth's biosphere.
  • In some countries, for example, plants and factories still emitting greenhouse gases and chemicals banned by international conventions into the atmosphere.
  • In order to reduce the harm caused by human activity to living nature, first of all, it is necessary to adopt and ratify a package of laws that would prohibit the unlimited usage of natural resources, even if it is economically costly.
  • Action will sooner or later lead to the fact that industry and agriculture will find a new non-extensive way of development, invent and promote nature friendly technologies.
  • For example, in Moscow 10 years ago it was forbidden to use river water as a cooler in power plants, which in turn led to the restoration of the fish population.
  • In conclusion, I am convinced that the main reason for reducing the number of biological species is human activity, which must be regulated legally.
  • If mankind does not change his mind and does not cease to be a consumer of our planet, then a cataclysm is inevitable, capable of destroying all life.
  • Although the issue is unlikely to be eliminated in the short term, these are concrete suggestions which can be followed to reduce the negative aspects of human lightheadedness.

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  • 문장 1
    • Over the past few decades, the flora and fauna have decreased dramatically, that, unfortunately, could lead to a full devastating of the whole world, we know today.
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  • 문장 2
    • There are a number of considerable dangers with regard to this phenomenon, and various measures can be taken both by the public sector and citizens to improve the situation.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
  • 문장 3
    • This essay will review the negative aspects of wildlife decreasing and will propose some solutions to address the problem.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
  • 문장 4
    • The most critical concern is that a growing society is increasingly demanding necessities such as clean water and nutritious food.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
  • 문장 5
    • As a result, to provide a continuously growing population, mankind has to cultivate more and more lands, destroying forests, marshes and other natural habitats of animals.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
  • 문장 6
    • Besides this, global warming, acid rains, ozone hole and many other artificial ecological issues, continue to cause damage, irreparable to the earth's biosphere.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
  • 문장 7
    • In some countries, for example, plants and factories still emitting greenhouse gases and chemicals banned by international conventions into the atmosphere.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
  • 문장 8
    • In order to reduce the harm caused by human activity to living nature, first of all, it is necessary to adopt and ratify a package of laws that would prohibit the unlimited usage of natural resources, even if it is economically costly.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8
  • 문장 9
    • Action will sooner or later lead to the fact that industry and agriculture will find a new non-extensive way of development, invent and promote nature friendly technologies.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9
  • 문장 10
    • For example, in Moscow 10 years ago it was forbidden to use river water as a cooler in power plants, which in turn led to the restoration of the fish population.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 10
  • 문장 11
    • In conclusion, I am convinced that the main reason for reducing the number of biological species is human activity, which must be regulated legally.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 11
  • 문장 12
    • If mankind does not change his mind and does not cease to be a consumer of our planet, then a cataclysm is inevitable, capable of destroying all life.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 12
  • 문장 13
    • Although the issue is unlikely to be eliminated in the short term, these are concrete suggestions which can be followed to reduce the negative aspects of human lightheadedness.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 13