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Please correct this text for me. Thank you so much.
There were 2 tigers, one was in the case, one was in the forest.
Both of them thought their life were bad and they admirated each other.
So they changed the life together.
When they started, they were very happy, but long time later, they dead.
One dead because of the hunger, one dead because of the bored.
Sometimes, everyone ignore the happiness of oneself, and keep an eye on the happiness of others.
But, all of your things are the things that everyone want to have.

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- Please correct this text for me. Thank you so much.
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Rečenica 1
- There were 2 tigers, one was in the case, one was in the forest.
  Glasajte sada!
- DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 1
Rečenica 2
- Both of them thought their life were bad and they admirated each other.
  Glasajte sada!
- DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 2
Rečenica 3
- So they changed the life together.
  Glasajte sada!
- DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 3
Rečenica 4
- When they started, they were very happy, but long time later, they dead.
  Glasajte sada!
- DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 4
Rečenica 5
- One dead because of the hunger, one dead because of the bored.
  Glasajte sada!
- DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 5
Rečenica 6
- Sometimes, everyone ignore the happiness of oneself, and keep an eye on the happiness of others.
  Glasajte sada!
- DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 6
Rečenica 7
- But, all of your things are the things that everyone want to have.
  Glasajte sada!
- DODATI NOVI PRIJEVOD! - Rečenica 7