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There were 2 tigers, one was in the case, one was in the forest.
Both of them thought their life were bad and they admirated each other.
So they changed the life together.
When they started, they were very happy, but long time later, they dead.
One dead because of the hunger, one dead because of the bored.
Sometimes, everyone ignore the happiness of oneself, and keep an eye on the happiness of others.
But, all of your things are the things that everyone want to have.

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- There were 2 tigers, one was in the case, one was in the forest.
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- Both of them thought their life were bad and they admirated each other.
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- So they changed the life together.
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문장 4
- When they started, they were very happy, but long time later, they dead.
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문장 5
- One dead because of the hunger, one dead because of the bored.
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문장 6
- Sometimes, everyone ignore the happiness of oneself, and keep an eye on the happiness of others.
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- But, all of your things are the things that everyone want to have.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7