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  • The growth of cities is always harmful for the environment

  • Today cities are getting bigger and bigger.
  • Some people think that it is not really good for the environment.
  • However,others believe that the devil is not as black as it is painted and growth of modern cities does not do a real harm to the environment.
  • From my personal point of view, growth of cities is a big problem we need to solve.
  • There are several reasons why it can be disastrous.
  • Firstly, when a city becomes huger, energy consumption increases and it makes us burn more coal and oil to cater for all our needs.As a result, carbon dioxide emission can destroy the Earth atmosphere.
  • Secondly, ecosystems and natural animal habitats begin to degrade in case of growth of cities because people need more space for building shopping malls,theatres,hospitals,school.
  • Nevertheless,there are people who suppose that growing cities are not a big deal.
  • They say that we have tecnologies which can save the environment and all humanity even if there are hundreds of megacites on our planet.
  • There is a lot of truth in what they say , but I believe that such tecnologies still need to be improved.
  • On the whole ,they are a matter of future.
  • In conclusion,I would like to say that I think people need to control birth rate and use the resources of our planet properly.
  • I am sure that this will lead to stopping growth of cities and will help us to live a better life.

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    • However,others believe that the devil is not as black as it is painted and growth of modern cities does not do a real harm to the environment.
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    • Firstly, when a city becomes huger, energy consumption increases and it makes us burn more coal and oil to cater for all our needs.As a result, carbon dioxide emission can destroy the Earth atmosphere.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • Secondly, ecosystems and natural animal habitats begin to degrade in case of growth of cities because people need more space for building shopping malls,theatres,hospitals,school.
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    • They say that we have tecnologies which can save the environment and all humanity even if there are hundreds of megacites on our planet.
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    • In conclusion,I would like to say that I think people need to control birth rate and use the resources of our planet properly.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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