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  • Personal Statement

  • The first decision I had taken by my self in my life is when I choose to study in the hospitality secondary school, I took this decision because cooking is one of my hobbies, and as I like to help and serve the people so I need to be involved in this industry.
  • At that time, I have written my vision that I am going to be a successful and well known person in this industry.
  • Therefore, I started with my missions by getting more experiences and qualifications.
  • The passion I have for foreign languages and international qualifications ensured my successful study in London College as well as some English and French curses.
  • After finishing my study, I started looking for a job in the tourism industry and I got a job opportunity to work as tourism sales staff with a big travel and tourism company in Saudi Arabia and I worked with them for 2 and half years.
  • I started with this department because I believe that if I want to success, then I need to start from the beginning to experience as much as can from this industry in order to reach my goal.
  • As a tourism sales executive, I was required to sell wide range of tourism services components to our customers such as flights, accommodations, meeting rooms, restaurants, transfers, cruises…etc.
  • This job gave me opportunity to obtain sales skills, and to become acquainted with providing a good customer care service, and with the work of such people as hotel, travel, and tourism managers.
  • I was deeply impressed by their diligence to satisfy every need of their customers.
  • I have realized the responsibility of their professions, but I have also understood how satisfied they are when their clients are happy.
  • As I worked with most of the hospitality and tourism services providers and I had good relations with them to be well known at the market, so I started getting better job opportunities from other travel and tourism companies.
  • As I saw that time the growth of the online travel agencies and the services which they provide, I realized that the online is the future market for this industry.
  • Therefore, I took the opportunity to work as a product development manager in a good online travel agency in order to follow the new trend of the industry.
  • I was so happy with my new job as I learnt and did many innovative things which was very useful for me to get new experiences.
  • I have worked with a professional team and we succeed to develop B2C, B2B and extranet systems for the company.
  • As a lover of nature and meeting new people with new cultures, the thing I like to do the most is to travel to new places which help me to get more experience about the touristic destinations.
  • Playing piano, photographing, and swimming are my hobbies too, these are my ways to relax, clear my mind, and keep fit.
  • I am reliable and positive person, who enjoys challenges and never gives up.
  • I dream of managing an international wholesaler travel and tourism company, I realize how great my ambitions are and how hard I must work to achieve them but I think it is most important to have a wish and will.
  • When one who has strong wishes is self-confident and self-motivated, when he is patient and determined he can fulfill them.
  • I know that besides all these qualities I must also have skills in order to succeed in this industry in which there is such a competition.
  • Studying Tourism management I will acquire the necessary skills and knowledge to be a prosperous travel and tourism manager.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • The first decision I had taken by my self in my life is when I choose to study in the hospitality secondary school, I took this decision because cooking is one of my hobbies, and as I like to help and serve the people so I need to be involved in this industry.
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  • Sentence 4
    • The passion I have for foreign languages and international qualifications ensured my successful study in London College as well as some English and French curses.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4
  • Sentence 5
    • After finishing my study, I started looking for a job in the tourism industry and I got a job opportunity to work as tourism sales staff with a big travel and tourism company in Saudi Arabia and I worked with them for 2 and half years.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5
  • Sentence 6
    • I started with this department because I believe that if I want to success, then I need to start from the beginning to experience as much as can from this industry in order to reach my goal.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6
  • Sentence 7
    • As a tourism sales executive, I was required to sell wide range of tourism services components to our customers such as flights, accommodations, meeting rooms, restaurants, transfers, cruises…etc.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7
  • Sentence 8
    • This job gave me opportunity to obtain sales skills, and to become acquainted with providing a good customer care service, and with the work of such people as hotel, travel, and tourism managers.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 8
  • Sentence 9
  • Sentence 10
    • I have realized the responsibility of their professions, but I have also understood how satisfied they are when their clients are happy.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 10
  • Sentence 11
    • As I worked with most of the hospitality and tourism services providers and I had good relations with them to be well known at the market, so I started getting better job opportunities from other travel and tourism companies.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 11
  • Sentence 12
    • As I saw that time the growth of the online travel agencies and the services which they provide, I realized that the online is the future market for this industry.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 12
  • Sentence 13
    • Therefore, I took the opportunity to work as a product development manager in a good online travel agency in order to follow the new trend of the industry.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 13
  • Sentence 14
  • Sentence 15
  • Sentence 16
    • As a lover of nature and meeting new people with new cultures, the thing I like to do the most is to travel to new places which help me to get more experience about the touristic destinations.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 16ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 16
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  • Sentence 19
    • I dream of managing an international wholesaler travel and tourism company, I realize how great my ambitions are and how hard I must work to achieve them but I think it is most important to have a wish and will.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 19ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 19
  • Sentence 20
  • Sentence 21
    • I know that besides all these qualities I must also have skills in order to succeed in this industry in which there is such a competition.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 21ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 21
  • Sentence 22