Korektoj

HELPU KOREKTI NUN!Ne korektita

Text from luis821 - English

Shadow
Alan was running for to long time.
He knew that his destiny was nea,those strange beings was stalke him.For a minute He were feel afraid but his conviction is strong He didn't stop until he were front to her.Everything was silent for a moment .He watched as the shadows surrounded him. she opened his mouth and said ¿I will die true?He said " Yes" after take his hand and waited until that moment

Titolo
- Shadow
  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Titolo
Frazo 1
- Alan was running for to long time.
  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
Frazo 2
- He knew that his destiny was nea,those strange beings was stalke him.For a minute He were feel afraid but his conviction is strong He didn't stop until he were front to her.Everything was silent for a moment .He watched as the shadows surrounded him. she opened his mouth and said ¿I will die true?He said " Yes" after take his hand and waited until that moment
  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2