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  • Shadow

  • Alan was running for to long time.
  • He knew that his destiny was nea,those strange beings was stalke him.For a minute He were feel afraid but his conviction is strong He didn't stop until he were front to her.Everything was silent for a moment .He watched as the shadows surrounded him. she opened his mouth and said ¿I will die true?He said " Yes" after take his hand and waited until that moment

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    • He knew that his destiny was nea,those strange beings was stalke him.For a minute He were feel afraid but his conviction is strong He didn't stop until he were front to her.Everything was silent for a moment .He watched as the shadows surrounded him. she opened his mouth and said ¿I will die true?He said " Yes" after take his hand and waited until that moment
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