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Lesheey'den mesaj - English

  • Cell phones

  • It is known that over the past few decades, thanks to technical progress, cell phones have become an indispensable attribute of modern society.
  • Despite the obvious benefits, the most important of which is the quality of life improvement, this essay will also consider the negative aspects, the most hazardous of which is psychological dependency.
  • On one hand, it is impossible to disagree that modern smartphone is represented as one of those pillars on which communication inside of the society relies and progresses.
  • In other words, without this invention, which allows one-touch making a call anywhere in the world, accessing the Internet or finding out any location, it is difficult to imagine a person walking in step with the times.
  • For example, according to statistics, the average person at the moment carries out conversations via mobile communication more than 25 percent.
  • On the other hand, it can’t be denied that excessive infatuation with a mobile phone in the long term could adversely affect the person, cause a strong psychological dependence.
  • Scientists around the world, every day, receive more and more evidence that virtual communication is gradually replacing the real, which in turn reduces socialization.
  • People begin to hesitate to get acquainted in the real world, especially teenagers with not fully formed psyche are affected.
  • According to recent studies, for instance, children who used the phone on average more than 3 hours a day, showed a psychosomatic picture identical to drug addicts.
  • In conclusion, this essay supports the idea that in the current circumstances, the use of mobile phones undoubtedly brings more benefits to the public than the rejection of these.
  • Nevertheless, people should use this invention wisely, avoiding overdoing.

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  • cümle 1
    • It is known that over the past few decades, thanks to technical progress, cell phones have become an indispensable attribute of modern society.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 1YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 1
  • cümle 2
    • Despite the obvious benefits, the most important of which is the quality of life improvement, this essay will also consider the negative aspects, the most hazardous of which is psychological dependency.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 2YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 2
  • cümle 3
    • On one hand, it is impossible to disagree that modern smartphone is represented as one of those pillars on which communication inside of the society relies and progresses.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 3YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 3
  • cümle 4
    • In other words, without this invention, which allows one-touch making a call anywhere in the world, accessing the Internet or finding out any location, it is difficult to imagine a person walking in step with the times.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 4YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 4
  • cümle 5
    • For example, according to statistics, the average person at the moment carries out conversations via mobile communication more than 25 percent.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 5YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 5
  • cümle 6
    • On the other hand, it can’t be denied that excessive infatuation with a mobile phone in the long term could adversely affect the person, cause a strong psychological dependence.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 6YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 6
  • cümle 7
    • Scientists around the world, every day, receive more and more evidence that virtual communication is gradually replacing the real, which in turn reduces socialization.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 7YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 7
  • cümle 8
  • cümle 9
    • According to recent studies, for instance, children who used the phone on average more than 3 hours a day, showed a psychosomatic picture identical to drug addicts.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 9YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 9
  • cümle 10
    • In conclusion, this essay supports the idea that in the current circumstances, the use of mobile phones undoubtedly brings more benefits to the public than the rejection of these.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 10YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 10
  • cümle 11