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Text von Ana_Vi - English

  • Could anyone check my poem, please?

  • I got a life to live I got a love to give I got a soul to feel You don't care.
  • I got a road to go And I won't let you know I need your smile and glow More than air.
  • That's in another space You need my warm embrace.
  • Here you don't know my name.
  • But I swear I'll bring you morning dew, Protect you from the flu, Without telling you I was there.

BITTE, hilf jeden Satz zu korrigieren! - English