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Could anyone check my poem, please?
I got a life to live I got a love to give I got a soul to feel You don't care.
I got a road to go And I won't let you know I need your smile and glow More than air.
That's in another space You need my warm embrace.
Here you don't know my name.
But I swear I'll bring you morning dew, Protect you from the flu, Without telling you I was there.

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Tiêu đề
- Could anyone check my poem, please?
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Tiêu đề
câu 1
- I got a life to live I got a love to give I got a soul to feel You don't care.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
câu 2
- I got a road to go And I won't let you know I need your smile and glow More than air.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
câu 3
- That's in another space You need my warm embrace.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
câu 4
- Here you don't know my name.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
câu 5
- But I swear I'll bring you morning dew, Protect you from the flu, Without telling you I was there.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5