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Text from Diane62 - English

  • My first book in English

  • *** 14(th) July 2017 *** A book… In English, please!
  • Dear diary, I would like to begin this diary telling how I began to read a novel in English.
  • So, this page show a reel story, which it happened around one week ago, when I went at my best friend’s home (her name is Mathilde).
  • I told her I wanted to improve my English this summer, because next year I will go at University and also because one of my dreams is to travel in the world.
  • She said if I wanted she had several books in English she could lend me.
  • I told I was not sure to arrived reading a book in English but she said “I have books also if you are a beginner, it can be a little difficult but very interesting.” So we took up upstairs to go in her bedroom.
  • On a white bookshelf there were various books: novels, comics, magazines… Mathilde took several novels and put them on his bed, then she spread them.
  • “This book is not easy because he talks about knights so the vocabulary is difficult and not current”.
  • She took him and put it on the floor.
  • “The others can be good to begin your first novel in English”. I looked them.
  • There were books which I didn’t understand the title.
  • But I discovered there was the novel “Harry Potter and the philosopher stone”.
  • I known the story because I have already seen all the films Harry Potter, in French obviously.
  • So I decided to take this book.
  • It should be more easy.
  • So I began to read this novel and I think it’s good.
  • I understand what it’s written and sometimes I go on Internet to see vocabulary I don’t undersand.
  • It’s difficult to express myself about that because I have not many vocabulary and problems to make sentences… But I think to read books and express myself in this diary can help me.
  • It was a little story which shows the first novel in English I begin.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English