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My day
Today is really wonderful weather so I'm decided to ride a bike.
I visited beautiful park in the my country, I just sat and looked video English lessons.
Actually it was amazing, but my body was attached by mosquitoes.
Today I moved on my bicycle without hands more times than usually.
I'm so glad this little thing.
Now I'm sitting in another park, texting this text and smoking cigarettes one by one.
I know it's my bad habit, but it makes me feel better.
I love my life and I hope my summer days will be happy!

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- My day
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문장 1
- Today is really wonderful weather so I'm decided to ride a bike.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I visited beautiful park in the my country, I just sat and looked video English lessons.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- Actually it was amazing, but my body was attached by mosquitoes.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- Today I moved on my bicycle without hands more times than usually.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- I'm so glad this little thing.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- Now I'm sitting in another park, texting this text and smoking cigarettes one by one.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
문장 7
- I know it's my bad habit, but it makes me feel better.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
문장 8
- I love my life and I hope my summer days will be happy!
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8