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My day
Today is really wonderful weather so I'm decided to ride a bike.
I visited beautiful park in the my country, I just sat and looked video English lessons.
Actually it was amazing, but my body was attached by mosquitoes.
Today I moved on my bicycle without hands more times than usually.
I'm so glad this little thing.
Now I'm sitting in another park, texting this text and smoking cigarettes one by one.
I know it's my bad habit, but it makes me feel better.
I love my life and I hope my summer days will be happy!

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- My day
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句子 1
- Today is really wonderful weather so I'm decided to ride a bike.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I visited beautiful park in the my country, I just sat and looked video English lessons.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- Actually it was amazing, but my body was attached by mosquitoes.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Today I moved on my bicycle without hands more times than usually.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- I'm so glad this little thing.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- Now I'm sitting in another park, texting this text and smoking cigarettes one by one.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- I know it's my bad habit, but it makes me feel better.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- I love my life and I hope my summer days will be happy!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8