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  • Modern illiteracy

  • It is sometimes argued that it should be more rational if the government would additionally finance education for mature people, instead of for children.
  • However, there are those who suppose that such action is an unreasonable waste of money.
  • This essay supports the later view because it is obvious that if adults really needed such knowledge, they would undoubtedly have acquired it.
  • Firstly, this essay will discuss the supposedly financial problem that state administration is going to solve with extra subsidies, secondly, it will analyze the reasons that prevent adults from becoming literate.
  • There is an opinion that the main part of those who did not received a primary education in their youth due to lack of necessary funds in the past.
  • But, it is worth noting that with the advent of modern computer technologies that allow you to learn independently, the situation radically changed.
  • Unfortunately, little do people realize that today contemporary educational software provides an absolutely free opportunity to master the skills of reading and writing.
  • For example, it has been reported by the world association of tutors that such programs are not only teach faster than the regular teachers, but also accessible to anyone’s level of income.
  • On the other hand, it is obvious that the main reason of the illiteracy of the adult population today is the absence of a pressing need for such in everyday life.
  • Moreover, most people without any education have adapted and live a happier life, although they acknowledge that they would not like to receive it.
  • So, it is not surprisingly that, for instance, according to the report of the same organization, only 8 percent of the respondents expressed a desire to start literacy training.
  • In conclusion, taking into account all written above, I am firmly convinced that government should not devote additional resources for eradicating illiteracy programs.
  • This is because neither do it is believed that persons of ripe years need to obtain such skills, nor do it could be trusted that special financing could provoke them to study.

SIUSPLAU, AJUDA A CORREGIR CADA SENTÈNCIA! - English

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  • Oració 1
    • It is sometimes argued that it should be more rational if the government would additionally finance education for mature people, instead of for children.
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    • Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 1Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 1
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    • Firstly, this essay will discuss the supposedly financial problem that state administration is going to solve with extra subsidies, secondly, it will analyze the reasons that prevent adults from becoming literate.
      Vota ara!
    • Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 4Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 4
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    • Unfortunately, little do people realize that today contemporary educational software provides an absolutely free opportunity to master the skills of reading and writing.
      Vota ara!
    • Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 7Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 7
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    • For example, it has been reported by the world association of tutors that such programs are not only teach faster than the regular teachers, but also accessible to anyone’s level of income.
      Vota ara!
    • Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 8Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 8
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    • On the other hand, it is obvious that the main reason of the illiteracy of the adult population today is the absence of a pressing need for such in everyday life.
      Vota ara!
    • Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 9Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 9
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    • So, it is not surprisingly that, for instance, according to the report of the same organization, only 8 percent of the respondents expressed a desire to start literacy training.
      Vota ara!
    • Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 11Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 11
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    • In conclusion, taking into account all written above, I am firmly convinced that government should not devote additional resources for eradicating illiteracy programs.
      Vota ara!
    • Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 12Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 12
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    • This is because neither do it is believed that persons of ripe years need to obtain such skills, nor do it could be trusted that special financing could provoke them to study.
      Vota ara!
    • Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 13Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 13