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Text from Lesheey - English

  • Modern illiteracy

  • It is sometimes argued that it should be more rational if the government would additionally finance education for mature people, instead of for children.
  • However, there are those who suppose that such action is an unreasonable waste of money.
  • This essay supports the later view because it is obvious that if adults really needed such knowledge, they would undoubtedly have acquired it.
  • Firstly, this essay will discuss the supposedly financial problem that state administration is going to solve with extra subsidies, secondly, it will analyze the reasons that prevent adults from becoming literate.
  • There is an opinion that the main part of those who did not received a primary education in their youth due to lack of necessary funds in the past.
  • But, it is worth noting that with the advent of modern computer technologies that allow you to learn independently, the situation radically changed.
  • Unfortunately, little do people realize that today contemporary educational software provides an absolutely free opportunity to master the skills of reading and writing.
  • For example, it has been reported by the world association of tutors that such programs are not only teach faster than the regular teachers, but also accessible to anyone’s level of income.
  • On the other hand, it is obvious that the main reason of the illiteracy of the adult population today is the absence of a pressing need for such in everyday life.
  • Moreover, most people without any education have adapted and live a happier life, although they acknowledge that they would not like to receive it.
  • So, it is not surprisingly that, for instance, according to the report of the same organization, only 8 percent of the respondents expressed a desire to start literacy training.
  • In conclusion, taking into account all written above, I am firmly convinced that government should not devote additional resources for eradicating illiteracy programs.
  • This is because neither do it is believed that persons of ripe years need to obtain such skills, nor do it could be trusted that special financing could provoke them to study.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Titolo
  • Frazo 1
    • It is sometimes argued that it should be more rational if the government would additionally finance education for mature people, instead of for children.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
    • This essay supports the later view because it is obvious that if adults really needed such knowledge, they would undoubtedly have acquired it.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
    • Firstly, this essay will discuss the supposedly financial problem that state administration is going to solve with extra subsidies, secondly, it will analyze the reasons that prevent adults from becoming literate.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
    • There is an opinion that the main part of those who did not received a primary education in their youth due to lack of necessary funds in the past.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
    • But, it is worth noting that with the advent of modern computer technologies that allow you to learn independently, the situation radically changed.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
    • Unfortunately, little do people realize that today contemporary educational software provides an absolutely free opportunity to master the skills of reading and writing.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
    • For example, it has been reported by the world association of tutors that such programs are not only teach faster than the regular teachers, but also accessible to anyone’s level of income.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
    • On the other hand, it is obvious that the main reason of the illiteracy of the adult population today is the absence of a pressing need for such in everyday life.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9
  • Frazo 10
    • Moreover, most people without any education have adapted and live a happier life, although they acknowledge that they would not like to receive it.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10
  • Frazo 11
    • So, it is not surprisingly that, for instance, according to the report of the same organization, only 8 percent of the respondents expressed a desire to start literacy training.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 11ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 11
  • Frazo 12
    • In conclusion, taking into account all written above, I am firmly convinced that government should not devote additional resources for eradicating illiteracy programs.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12
  • Frazo 13
    • This is because neither do it is believed that persons of ripe years need to obtain such skills, nor do it could be trusted that special financing could provoke them to study.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13