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Văn bản từ riichard_c - English

  • I had a date with someone

  • Well, I wore my best suit to meet someone who I contacted by Facebook, well, she lives close to my house, however, I didn't meet her.
  • I went to her house and she looks at me and she I asked to enter to her house and I said of course after that I felt some nervous so I asked to take seat after a few minutes she delivered me a big plate of food.
  • I spent all the night with her, after a week I come back to her house but this time she looked some strange , she doesn't even was kind with me. that fact was like someone sticks a knife in my heart so I asked to her why does she have that behavior toward me , she answered that had reconciled with her ex-boyfriend , I picked my cap and left her house

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • Well, I wore my best suit to meet someone who I contacted by Facebook, well, she lives close to my house, however, I didn't meet her.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • I went to her house and she looks at me and she I asked to enter to her house and I said of course after that I felt some nervous so I asked to take seat after a few minutes she delivered me a big plate of food.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • I spent all the night with her, after a week I come back to her house but this time she looked some strange , she doesn't even was kind with me. that fact was like someone sticks a knife in my heart so I asked to her why does she have that behavior toward me , she answered that had reconciled with her ex-boyfriend , I picked my cap and left her house
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3