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Smile
Hi!
this is my first text in English so, be patient!
I wanted to write about "smile"...
a little word, but full of meanings...
there are many kinds of smiles...
there is a smile for show your happyness but there is a false-smile too...
you can see the difference in the eyes....
sometimes they smile too and always respect what there is in your heart.
Smile is free....a little thing for those who do it...but sometimes, it's a big thing for those who recive it.
remember....smile can save a person....
let smile....it's free!!!!

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- Smile
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문장 1
- Hi!
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문장 2
- this is my first text in English so, be patient!
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문장 3
- I wanted to write about "smile"...
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- a little word, but full of meanings...
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- there are many kinds of smiles...
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- there is a smile for show your happyness but there is a false-smile too...
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- you can see the difference in the eyes....
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- sometimes they smile too and always respect what there is in your heart.
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- Smile is free....a little thing for those who do it...but sometimes, it's a big thing for those who recive it.
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문장 10
- remember....smile can save a person....
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 10
문장 11
- let smile....it's free!!!!
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 11