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Smile
Hi!
this is my first text in English so, be patient!
I wanted to write about "smile"...
a little word, but full of meanings...
there are many kinds of smiles...
there is a smile for show your happyness but there is a false-smile too...
you can see the difference in the eyes....
sometimes they smile too and always respect what there is in your heart.
Smile is free....a little thing for those who do it...but sometimes, it's a big thing for those who recive it.
remember....smile can save a person....
let smile....it's free!!!!

标题
- Smile
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句子 1
- Hi!
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句子 2
- this is my first text in English so, be patient!
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I wanted to write about "smile"...
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- a little word, but full of meanings...
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- there are many kinds of smiles...
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- there is a smile for show your happyness but there is a false-smile too...
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- you can see the difference in the eyes....
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- sometimes they smile too and always respect what there is in your heart.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8
句子 9
- Smile is free....a little thing for those who do it...but sometimes, it's a big thing for those who recive it.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9
句子 10
- remember....smile can save a person....
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 10
句子 11
- let smile....it's free!!!!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 11